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Date Posted: 20:03:02 02/03/03 Mon
Author: STARKS (the mouth of madnes)
Author Host/IP: cpe-68-118-252-240.ma.charter.com / 68.118.252.240
Subject: Straight Spittin'. The Reason for alarm. Pure Fire here. ENJOY!

i was sent to elevate
second guess the jeaolous fate
levitate to heavens gate
where i script scrolls so vivid
i get sent to hell to bake
burn when i return to earth
like i just fell from space
if the lounge is non profit
fuck it son sell this place
i'll just have to find another space
to overwelm with grace
i'm at the helm of hate, so pardon me
my hands move at remarkable speeds
with the fierce adrenaline of a swarm of carpenter bee's
i startle the keys with my razor sharp tip's
see stark's spits that hard shit that rips apart kids
rardless of the number of carcasses
found out where the garbage sits
this is hardly a gift at times i feel possessed
i'm sorry it's just the mood i've refreshed next
one minute i feel blessed the next i'm vexed
to the point of no return like unprotected sex
tryin to find the style that sum's it up the best
no wonder you live stressed
you second guess every breath when in the fear of death
i find the window on the other side
is by far the clearest yet
so i take a peek, and what i see startles me
a bunch of retard mc's shed the only tears left
before they dry up like old pussies
or leftover drinks when i have no beer left
at the infamous fork in the road
i was forced to veer left
where i met an old gypsy who commandeered this quest

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this was kinda simple in the begining.. i wasnt really feelin it there.. but it picced up towards the end.. iono, it wasnt that bad... keep uppin (NT) -- ��mz. m�j��麺�, 20:38:23 02/03/03 Mon
yeah -- the fish, 20:40:47 02/03/03 Mon
umm...don't know....borin ass subject really......i think this is some more 'misdirected talent'...cuz it seems ya got it in ya to do somethin nice, cuz it was some aight rhymin in here and some fairly decent word usage......just....i don't know, a bunch of people these days seem to be rappin wit no inspiration...no motive....and that's how this appears to me....just rhymin for the sake of it.....find somethin to inspire you and motivate ya, then write somethin wit meanin....peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:57:03 02/04/03 Tue
^take notice of this advice...he's just give you ten critiques for the price of one and it's the best you could heed...Do you. You have what it takes without question...Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:26:51 02/04/03 Tue
word.. it was boring but the flow made me keep reading it flowed so water-based.. bulk up your subject matter and and keep your flow and you'll be nice.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:07:05 02/04/03 Tue

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