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Date Posted: 00:48:27 02/04/03 Tue
Author: J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm
Author Host/IP: 63-pool3.ras10.tnnas.alerondial.net / 206.148.182.63
Subject: yo this was aight right here....nothin that really stood out, but nice imagery and illustration....pretty good word usage and some aight rhymin in here....i only have two 'complaints' about this: for one, ya gotta switch up that rhyme scheme some more...got old real quick just the same thing pretty much line after line...and for the second, this just seemed a bit unnatural to me, but that could just be me, who knows...any ways, this was cool...keep doin ya thang, peace!
In reply to: ºººmz. mîjå¬þø麺º 's message, "iigh, i replied to 3 posts.. so this shouldnt get deleted, i've posted here a while bacc.. its been a while since the last time i dropped anything... but heres one of my attempts at this story line shit... "Gauntlets of a King" ... peep an give honest crits... all feedbacc is much appreciated" on 21:01:06 02/03/03 Mon


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