THE GAME OF LIFE....yo,i made it short 2 see what u think ....if itz cool i'll post a whole song but this just a sample 4 mouths to taste test -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 13:31:37 02/04/03 Tue
Author: THa LOST 1
Author Host/IP: spider-wl073.proxy.aol.com / 205.188.199.53
Subject: THE GAME OF LIFE....yo,i made it short 2 see what u think ....if itz cool i'll post a whole song but this just a sample 4 mouths to taste test

yeah, they say that hell is hot but the flamez in this glock is concieted and selfish/
throw ya body deep wit shellfish,like Pac and Elvis the Pelvis i'm contraversy thirsty/
the Gods cursed me but if i survive i'm worthy,mona-lisa breast milk nurtured me until i was 30 months i swear i smoke 30 blunts to grip the mic and freak the funk out/
i used to break in houses now i violate female spouses dick in they face so what if itz rape mentally fucked and my brain cannot escape the urges it perpetuates/

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THE GAME OF LIFE??...son you done lost...haha...on the real....find a solid rhyme scheme and follow it....work on your content and write more yo....p'z (NT) -- Nakixem of AM/OMNI, 14:23:48 02/04/03 Tue
Nah, don't even post the rest. matter of fact just elevate till you got something ta post. some words were all right maybe, be u need ta put more thought in a rhyme PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 14:30:25 02/04/03 Tue
flow was there...but it was mad short...add more, that opening line was ill to me though (NT) -- Vis, 14:39:58 02/04/03 Tue
wat Vision said, my thoughts exactly...... (NT) -- Essence....AM, 15:45:55 02/04/03 Tue
I agree.. but don't give up from diss-apointment.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:52:09 02/04/03 Tue

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