<font color=lime>keystyle.....<font color=white>...a piece i call.... *Positive words spoken in these times of Hardships*.....<font color=red>Enjoy....<font color=yellow>PEACE -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 17:46:40 02/05/03 Wed
Author: Essence...........AM
Author Host/IP: ip68-5-113-200.oc.oc.cox.net / 68.5.113.200
Subject: keystyle........a piece i call.... *Positive words spoken in these times of Hardships*.....Enjoy....PEACE

by subtracting the negative only positive emotions remain
the pain forms into invisible liquid that falls as rain
I regain through a silent storm that covers mental planes
feeding the seeded plantations from which elevation sprang
seasons change as my landscapes re-arrange their climates
trees shed light blinding the evil inhabitants, the tyrants
I climb mountainous terrain as hail and ice fall violent
staring at the peaks of my realizations as I continue shining
rocky pathways and dirt roads lead me astray into new ways
as I view each passing day I realize how blessed I am to say
"That the divine has me blown away on the winds of Eternity
and continues to carry me on my quest for inner discovery"
linguistics smother me as I erect the twenty six letters incredibly
resurrect the notions of brotherly love threw mediumed loving see?
we all share the same feelings for writing how exciting it can be
how inviting it may seem to sometimes drop the pen we still pursue
because those hidden clues lye deep in the heart of you
and of me agreed? we can all get through these times of hardships
fused with hard riffs followed by a melodic bass line that sparks wits
my mind goes threw osmosis when I sit focused and hoping
that my words will provoke men to stray away from boasting
humble sages spoke in tongues reciting pages now they are ageless
star wanderers finding strength from our sentences created
as my essence is interrogated by hatred I turn the other cheek
two black eyes are better then giving into satans reach
internal demons creep disguised as mind altering substances
I brush those feelings away with language spoken flawless
honesty is my promise I keep to myself and those in need
to see that greed can breed something that no one man can flee

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loved the wordplay...thought it was a bit long, but still skillful...one (NT) -- does it matter, 17:57:26 02/05/03 Wed
whoa two black eyes are better then giving in to Satans reach.. loved that line.. dawg we have to collab as well, I remember first peeping you out, even from the start you had a nice way with words- you've only elevated since then.. nice post man, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:40:56 02/05/03 Wed
nice keystyle yo...."linguistics smother me as I erect the twenty six letters incredibly"...ill line right there...liked da concept...dope message...it's hard to see da positive sometimes..but it's always there waitin for us to find it...keep this up and stay up (NT) -- ...DiAtRiBe..., 18:46:16 02/05/03 Wed
Felt this one throughly. Liked the line about erecting 26 letters, flipped that one nicely. Flow was bananas.....Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:08:11 02/05/03 Wed

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