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Date Posted: 19:51:10 02/05/03 Wed
Author: Kenny-D
Author Host/IP: rtr-22.CapCollege.BC.CA / 134.87.22.1
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Freestyle, check it out and compare it to your own

it's makin' you cry and wonder why you don't just die
if you could fly you'd try and beat on by all those who lie
if it was up to me I'd see everyone express lyrically and set their minds free without violence or need to agree.
I'd abolish colour; Call everyone brother and spread love to every other who would take it from another.
I'd procure a cure that was sure to leave the mind pure and lead everyone from the lure of the demure it'd endure
the pain in our brain that seems to remain intent on the rain that plagues the plain of gain and leads us to strain, some say the answers fame, I ain't into that game fuck a name or a chance to dance with a dame who would'nt if I was lame.
that's why I'm far from famous, Rich cuz I'm nameless and strong cuz I'm painless...

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do you mean a keystyle? cause this is bad for a freestyle.. my freestyle has gotten rediculous over the last few years.. keep writing man this place will help you.. peace. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:13:21 02/05/03 Wed
I thought you connected words alright but at the same time it seemed like it was done simply to rhyme instead of have emotion or substance behind it. Plus it was mad short. Keep at iy though (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:49:33 02/05/03 Wed

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