keystyle....<font color=yellow>Live to Dream, or do you Dream to live?.....<font color=red>PEACE -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 21:08:33 01/14/03 Tue
Author: X-SINCE...Abzent Minded
Author Host/IP: ip68-5-113-200.oc.oc.cox.net / 68.5.113.200
Subject: keystyle....Live to Dream, or do you Dream to live?.....PEACE

lost in this feeling, its like waking while dreaming
but the state is on the unconscious tip, I�m seeing
a new world threw clear visions separating truth from deceiving
creating fate is something that takes mass amounts of weight
to be lifted off my mind so I can finally demonstrate
how to lift the gates and walk freely in vast space
lucid in its make up the bond breaks up when I wake up
but imagine waking up in the same place you just left
looking at a wrist watch and the numbers move to the right and left
its simple math dissected with patterned breathe
the mind can travel infinite distances for instance into dimensions split
return un-harmed with proof evident, I saw, I felt, the moves were heaven sent
the mood replenishes as I start the day its prevalent
because to me sleep is the true key to reach the light
once shown I awoke and still had embedded insight
I will forever hold it tight on this materialistic flight
once I die time will no longer be, the sea will never again touch me
the atomic make up will still be the same recipe, just now I�m energy
cycling the globe relentlessly for eternity bonded to a spiritual connection
telepathic resurrection predestined by the grand invention
did I mention that we are never truly going to know ourselves
because ourselves already know their own ancient ways felt
its called natural physics, only as neo-humans we will see prolific
did you realize answers circulate daily among the atmosphere?
once the answer is out there, brains can pick up the signal loud and clear
even if you don�t realize it you elevate to higher states daily
scaling the invisible galaxy that lives within your imagery
innumerable possibilities allow for pictures to be spoken free

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tight composition -- ir8te, 22:09:37 01/14/03 Tue
dopest post i read today...deep stuff man...too many ill lil things here and there to highlight just one...nice drop yo...keep 'em comin(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...wonderin how many other ways u can come up with to spell "essence", 23:27:57 01/14/03 Tue
At first I was like its okay......and stop reading.......but the middle of the verse caught my attention........and I began to feel it more.........with each reading.............nice poetic work yo..............Ghost (NT) -- Wes Jones, 00:58:45 01/15/03 Wed
i liked this. it made me feel like my existence is completely useless. this is poetry fitted perfectly in rap format (NT) -- con, 04:34:01 01/15/03 Wed
To tell the truth I'm not at all sure I like this, I mean it was tight when it comes to concept and there are some very ill next level ideas displayed but the flow was wierd to me in many places and sorta threw the poetics of it all off, but like I said I can grasp the concept it's just not packaged as neatly as it coulda been...pz (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:16:40 01/15/03 Wed
nice, well processed thinking with ill usage of words... nice drop kid (NT) -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 16:28:27 01/15/03 Wed

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