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Date Posted: 13:42:02 01/19/03 Sun
Author: Ben
Author Host/IP: 1Cust152.tnt2.tco2.da.uu.net / 67.201.198.152
Subject:

Tell me wat yall think bout diz...

a face like yours is one only a mother could love,
i got your gurl on my dick, coverin it like a glove,
all of my rhymes are golden, sent from above,
last night your mom told me, she thinks shes in love,

fuckin with me son, damn your already doomed,
cuz i spit and make it so hot you wanna leave the room,
you cant touch me, cuz imma real G,
nigga ill sting you like a bumble bee,
i hurt you and leave you suckin your thumb,
your breath is hot like fire, do you want some gum

when im done with you your gonna wish you didnt know me,
imma leave you in the dark like oby one canoby,
use the force cuz son your gonna need it,
without some help, boy you need to beat it,
make like micheal jackson and dont stop til you get enough,
cuz son if you want me to, ill give it to you rough,
ill tear your head off and swallow it,
and after that your body is gonna fallow it,
and while your in my stomac with nothing else to do,
i want you to think about what i did to you,

i could hurt you and leave you in a comma,
my rhymes hit you so hard you'll fly to oaklahoma,
and ill make you walk all the way back to this battle,
ill make you shake and rattle,
your moms my horse, you can be the sattle,

i think you need to come up with something better,
your rhymes are cold, i think they need a sweater,

okay i think its time for me to stop holding back,
i think its time for me to let you know where im at,
im on a level that you will never reach,
my rhymes are sweet and tasty like a peach,
your shit is garbage, it cant compair to mine,
ill stick you like a porkypine,

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very simplistic....u needa elevate alil more kid...throw some knowledge in ya rhyme scheme.....u needa spit non played shit..."sting like a buble bee"... ??? (NT) -- -��`�...��`Dialec� of A.M.��`�...��`�-, 14:43:22 01/19/03 Sun
yeah like dialect said above, way to simplistic. definitely need to step it up.but keep postin and peeping other posts and you'll do fine. (NT) -- starks, 15:18:36 01/19/03 Sun
This wasn't very good, but don't get discouraged, take it all in stride one step at a time, elevation will occur if you devote the proper time (NT) -- I BET YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW, 16:37:34 01/19/03 Sun
reminds of what J was saying about "doctor suess"...hahaha whatever dude (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:06:57 01/20/03 Mon

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