**~~DAMN IT..I DID ANOTHER AUDIO~~**...THIS ONE IS ENTITLED..."MENTAL STRENGTH"...THIS IS NOT A PUNCHLINE AUDIO..MORE OR SOMETHING TO VENT A LIL..FLOW IS A LIL FAST BUT MORE ON BEAT THEN PREVIOUS AUDIOS IN MY OPINION..I STILL NEED TO FLOW DOWN A LIL MORE...I'M GETTING THERE..I TRIED CHANGING A FEW THINGS TO IMPROVE QUALITY..HOPEFULLY IT WORKED..LYRICS INCLUDED IN INSIDE FOR THOSE WHO CANT PEEP AUDIOS.. -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 17:08:52 01/24/03 Fri
Author: D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.i....Proud Sposor of Da Dlusional Walk For Fun With All Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People..
Author Host/IP: cache-dh03.proxy.aol.com / 205.188.208.167
Subject: **~~DAMN IT..I DID ANOTHER AUDIO~~**...THIS ONE IS ENTITLED..."MENTAL STRENGTH"...THIS IS NOT A PUNCHLINE AUDIO..MORE OR SOMETHING TO VENT A LIL..FLOW IS A LIL FAST BUT MORE ON BEAT THEN PREVIOUS AUDIOS IN MY OPINION..I STILL NEED TO FLOW DOWN A LIL MORE...I'M GETTING THERE..I TRIED CHANGING A FEW THINGS TO IMPROVE QUALITY..HOPEFULLY IT WORKED..LYRICS INCLUDED IN INSIDE FOR THOSE WHO CANT PEEP AUDIOS..

Beat Produced By: Side City Records.. "Retaliation"
(mp3.com/sidecity)

Lo Fi:
http://reeves.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/38096

Hi Fi:
http://reeves.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/38096

Lyrics

perfection on reflections in same direction as injections,
with small sessions of pure adrenaline attention.
storing weapons as prevention,my mind starts progression,
lyrical aggression that'll put bomb engineers in question.
thats the linguistical attitude i express,the mess,the mental stress,
the rhymes are perfect that seperate from the rest.
battling the angel of death if he intercepts what i have left,
trying to snatch my breath as my thoughts will eject.
Suicidal attempts have sent signals that my soul wants to rest.
thats why i stride for sucess,ignoring all life's suspense events,
trying to prevent my scars to become evident with common sense,
i wipe off tears of stress,
my soul has a vest to stop pain that appears on my chest.
i once felt pain within,starting praying to makeup for sins.
a simple grin could make a series of frowns seem slim,
where i could begin, to turn around pain under my skin.
getting pain off my mind with series of lines,my rhymes,
catapulting signs that my darkness within will soon shine,
that my hopes and smiles with interwine,with time,
mental strength would become stronger each day,
for this i pray,that the pain i would feel will go away or sway,
smiles wont delay cuz happiness would be potrayed.
mind sprays visions of when soul is carried away.
i dont understand how if our life is one big plan,or a scam,
this obviously means our soul's life span is in god's hands.
whats the meaning of our decisions,or choice of religion,
or our lifes mission,if we dont know our deaths provision.

thats why i fight for what i believe,or need to suceed,
cuz pain is the only disease thats actually found within me,
now i hold my head high when i feel pain inside,
no longer do i struggle to survive,now i have pride,
to be able to live each day feeling i'm much much stronger,
my honor,somehow seems to be able to last me much longer.
mental strenghth reflects on my self respect,
no neglect,no longer do i attempt to be so perfect,
cuz i accept myself for who i am despite neglect,
or lack of respect,never will forget those who gave me strength.
ignoring the broken promises or lies staring into the sky,
thanking god for me being alive.

An Abzent Minded Inc/O.M.N.I. and DlusionaL Walk Production

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honestly shyt is ight...i think if u make ya lyrix more simple and basic and shorten ya bars a lil ya flow will be more smooth stay up 1ne (NT) -- Luciano, 19:50:10 01/24/03 Fri
it was aight....i dont think you need to make your lyrics more simple and basic at all....OR shorten ya bars....just slow ya flow down. take ya time and enjoy the beat...just have fun with it, when you spit fast you sound too tongue tied and not clear enough...just take ya time with it, trust me you'll be aight and might be better off (NT) -- Vision, 21:38:44 01/24/03 Fri
Yeah work on fitting the beat better.. i wonder if when you write the lyrics if you have the beat going, and you're spittin it as you go along.. That's the best way to make sure the flow is right.. Cuz right now it just sounds like you're thorwing some lyrics over a beat with no regards to how the beat works at all, just cramming it all in there.. This beat is pretty nice tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 04:50:09 01/25/03 Sat
Now the beat I like...delivery still shakey...speak clearer...almost on beat ...get ya timing right...caught the part where you fucked up...keep practicing (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:48:33 01/25/03 Sat
as a keystyle it is dope, I wasn't realy feeling the audio because the lyrics where hella nice but maybe too contrived for an audio (without them I dunno what you are saying)...but nice flow at the beginning of the second verse and the lyrics were sick...peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:47:41 01/25/03 Sat

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