Date Posted:21:36:35 02/08/04 Sun Author: Prateek Srivastava Subject: Respond Please
I'm Prateek Srivastava, I posted the sketch, Thanksgiving Memory, 1,2,3. I would like to say to Ken, the only person who actually critiqued my work, that you are right. This little story is made for sit-coms and is not that good for SNL. I guess, that is what this site is about, putting your ideas, because they are just ideas. I also wanted to say that Ken, you graded my sketch. With the D, but uh, you could have given some more feedback. That is really why I put my sketches. because I really some critquing, I don't care if you say it's bad, but tell e why and what I can do to improve. Anyone else who read my sketch I would appreciate some feedback on how it was. I really want to know how it was.