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Date Posted: 19:54:48 03/08/04 Mon
Author: Since he's not getting much back, hope this will do.
Subject: JPIII reviews
In reply to: Patrick Lonergan 's message, "REVIEWS: Colin Firth 03/06/04" on 01:54:33 03/06/04 Sat

Fisherman Job Interview
I really, really liked this sketch. Very original. You can tell dialogue is good when the writer uses limited paranthesis and the sketch still delivers. I thought the stand-out was the writing for Firth's character. One thing I might change was Forte's character. He seems to "uh...I...buh..." alot and I didn't think there was much characterization there. Even though I know you probably wrote him in as the "straight man" I thought you still might have been able to add a little something more to that character. That's only a little thing though: great sketch overall.

The Time Machine
This one was pretty solid as well. Didn't like it as much as your first one, but it was solid.
I don't really know what to say, very few mistakes I thought. The idea was pretty cutting-edge and the lines elaborated on it well.
"Jesus wants me to come?" "In more ways than one!" This was a funny line but I know I've heard it somewhere before. Again, yeah, few mistakes.

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