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Date Posted: 20:01:39 03/08/04 Mon
Author: Same guy
Subject: Re: JPIII reviews
In reply to: Since he's not getting much back, hope this will do. 's message, "JPIII reviews" on 19:54:48 03/08/04 Mon

Little thing: In Time machine, I thought the transition from "Oh god, the lord seduced me" to "Now we're all going back, and it's ok" was a tad uneven. Maybe a few more lines where Jonas is completely refusing to go back might do. Didn't hurt the sketch at all though.

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