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Date Posted: 09:32:43 07/13/14 Sun
Author: mkim
Subject: In the scrlpt it didnt seem to include how much pain Harm was in. That was the reason I liked Renee less in this scene. It irritated me that she didnt give him time to settle in, catch his breath. The script looked as if he was just stringing her along, whch I never thought was fair.
In reply to: Alicia 's message, "Sail Back Saturday - Script vs Scene - Adrift" on 01:05:10 07/13/14 Sun


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[> Yes.. that was my big issue with Renee in the scene..(inside) -- Alicia, 11:42:27 07/13/14 Sun

The poor guy almost died..is bruised and battered..and the minute he sits down she pounces. And then, it's Mac's turn for him to pick up her pieces.

In the script, there was a note somewhere connected to one of their scenes that Harm and Renee realize he loves Mac more than Renee.

What also changed was the Brumby can't get past them scene. As written, Harm more or less pushes Mac out the door to go to him and marry him--which definitely had a different vibe.

I really didn't find Mac a sympathetic character as shown.
On the screen she chose to go after Mic, choosing him. Then suddenly as it progressed, it was all Harm's fault.
I would have viewed her more sympathetically with him pushing her to Mic.

Its amazing what a few snips here and there can do to the overall meaning.


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[> [> I noticed that with the 2 other versions I read of possible finale endings. Someone also posted a partial script of the porch scene and i thought OMG if Id only known the whole thing wouldnt have been so frustrating!! -- mkim, 21:46:50 07/13/14 Sun


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[> [> [> SHOULD have said series finale endings -- mkim, 21:48:30 07/13/14 Sun


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