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Date Posted: 12:51:21 08/01/20 Sat
Author: Who4m1
Subject: Nice chapter
In reply to: Comicality 's message, ""New Kid In School 65" Is Up! :)" on 18:23:56 07/31/20 Fri

It's always a joy to join Randy and Ryan. And it's a good depiction of the typical fear/nervousness about coming out that's almost always there, even when there probably isn't much bad to expect. It's a bit cruel to the readers for the moment to make the whole chapter more or less just a build up for the coming out, but a good climax needs to be built up properly.
Also if you find the time for the few clicks, you may want to change the gayauthors title to Chapter 65 - "Whispers End" instead of Chapter 66 -"Whispers End", so that the numbers are coherent (it already is 65 everywhere else).
Nothing important, but I wanted to note it.

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