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Date Posted: 13:42:00 03/07/03 Fri
Author: N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 168.58.42.203
Subject: well...uhh...rhyme scheme was awful....I mean...don't try crammin so much shit in one line...split it up and get vivid with every line...instead of havin to cram one thought into ONE line....Armor I Gedden?..uhh...I dunno bout that man....keep writin and FREESTYLE....a rhythm should stick to your head when you wanna key so the rhyme structure will be a lot better....just...elevate man...don't try too hard.....peace
In reply to: the Dark spiTTER 's message, "early morning keystyle... think that my keys are better then my writtens when I post them up... just peep and criticize" on 13:24:49 03/07/03 Fri


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  • what ever man.... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 17:05:42 03/07/03 Fri




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