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Date Posted: 15:38:42 03/05/03 Wed
Author: ONSLAUGHT
Author Host/IP: cache-dm07.proxy.aol.com / 205.188.209.75
Subject: new to the lounge and i'm bout to make an impact

my rhymes explosive
if you notice
you'll be exploded
clips is loaded and you dead in this game of hip-hop
have ya family laughing at you
like you battled chris rock
spit my lyrics backwards
resembling kris kross
i take a shit on emcees when i'm pissed off
pussy niggas deserved to get they dick ripped off
lick shots for my people strugglin
and hustlin crack
fake thugs, b.b. guns is whut you holdin
when you bustin them caps
trustin a cop, hell no
try to arrest me and i'll hit em in the mouth with my elbow
i'm defiant, my clients are dangerous
i'm a free agent replacing those with hatred
i'm placed with animals in cages
kill them and get away with it
i'm every other rappers favorite
onslaught... remember tha name
ten in ya frame, my pen is my pain
fuck rhyming about girls in clubs
that shit is played out
come to me with that b.s.
and get layed out
look at tupac life's
mine is taking the same route
yeah i'm from the west coast
bay area... thats where i'm from
punch emcees in they jaw
have em swallow they teeth
and now they chewing with they gums
whose better than me... no one

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I agree about the "rapping about girls in the club"....That's played out.....and so is your rhyme style....Sorry, but it's true....It's DAMN true!!!....Try concentrating on bringing your rhyme out in a way that it's different (content-wise) from anybody else....Then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:23:25 03/05/03 Wed
hit em in the face with my elbow.. made me laugh.. um this was iight.. but yall should put more time into it if you want better feed back.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:59:46 03/05/03 Wed
real dope but i rap bout clubs and hoes and all that real good tho (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 20:50:22 03/05/03 Wed

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