truthfully i thought the concept was the weakest thing about this post...everything else, vocab, flow, etc was on point...but the whole race card and society card have been used more than punches involving the word "come/cum"...the post was well written, complex, just think you shud find some newer subject matter... -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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