<font color=orange>This was alright. I couldnt tell if the lines were too long or not long enough, you kind of jumped around a bit with that. If you gonna use Bimbo in a rhyme you got to flip that better. Keep doin what you doin though -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 23:46:40 02/27/03 Thu
Author: ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm
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Subject: This was alright. I couldnt tell if the lines were too long or not long enough, you kind of jumped around a bit with that. If you gonna use Bimbo in a rhyme you got to flip that better. Keep doin what you doin though
In reply to: Pat D.A.W.G 's message, "Trying ta stay up and regain movement to this pen PEACE" on 20:50:30 02/27/03 Thu

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