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Date Posted: 13:10:32 02/28/03 Fri
Author: the dark spitter... sorry if the post is mad short... ya'll know I'm capable of postin more
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
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a dark spitter early morning post... a key to sharpen the ill skills...

underground hip hop emcee/
in mindstate my two eyes see/
the world confused with madness in captivity/
I rap similies/
vocab equipped with mentality lyricaly/
I relese the true youth thats stuck in me/
lucky/
I'm a roughneck from NY with ill capabilities/
illmentals flowin at speeds that'll combust the spleen in the anotomy/
bodilly sprit concealed with dark outlines and devious infrastructures/
one glance of my metaphors causes the cardiovasular to rupture/
smutherd D.N.A and complicated chromosone will be evaperated and sucked up/
wacks will be "FUCKED UP"/
like the "AIRPLANE" that crashed in the pentagon/
I'll demolish the worlds beings with empowerd surges that'll kill the devils army with one punch/
emcees will parrish within the globe and get twited into posistions that'll leave there spine hunched/

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better den the previous post i've read..some lines looked like u tried too hard..this wasnt bad..but nothing special either..keep droppin though..maybe those other newbies will leave once they see a somewhat of a newbie like urself actually has potential and they dont.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..wheelchair kids have no potential climbing up stairs.., 14:03:17 02/28/03 Fri
ur a piece of shit -- Jay Tha Hustla, 14:19:30 02/28/03 Fri
not bad but your still a bitch -- a.k., 14:21:06 02/28/03 Fri
bitch -- c-dawg, 15:01:21 02/28/03 Fri
wrtie your own shit -- c-dawg, 15:07:00 02/28/03 Fri

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