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Date Posted: 00:12:13 03/01/03 Sat
Author: ===||Swords--->
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 12.25.217.177
Subject: Flow is much improved.. Still a few lines here and there that you gotta rush.. Some of the syllables arent as clear as others.. Lyrics were nice.. Beat was ill.. nice selection.. not much else to say.. Good improvement..
In reply to: D-luSIoNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Fast and the Furious 3 will be based on wheelchair races.. 's message, "**SOME REAL LYRICAL SHYT NOT NO FAKE THUG SHIT DATS BEEN POSTED HERE LATELY..**PLEASE ONLY CRITIQUE FLOW,LYRICS,&DELIVERY.I KNOW MY MIC IS WACK & MY SOUNDCARD IS BLAH..JUST LOOKING 4 CRITIQUES ON WHAT I MENTIONED..SINCE DATS SOMETHING I COULD CONTROL ON MY OWN...ENTITLED.."MENTAL VISIONS"..LYRICS INCLUDED INSIDE...KINDA RUSHED THIS FOR SOME REASON..WANTED TO WORK ON OTHER BEATS ALREADY LOL" on 16:05:01 02/28/03 Fri


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  • This was a pretty tight audio...when you compare this to your first, MUCH improvement on the flow...I think you still have to pronounce some words better, but other than that...I just think you've elevated overall...I like the instrumental...some smooth shit...and you rode it pretty well...but what am I to say???..lol...can't wait for the new shit...keep on gradually improving and you'll prove to be up there real quick...dope shit..peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 01:11:51 03/01/03 Sat




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