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Date Posted: 15:45:20 02/21/03 Fri
Author: h £ k §/|_ A \/©....
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 168.10.11.172
Subject: Try stretching your bars' length...instead of having "lines" with just four of five words in them...<<<<..That shit's annoying!!!....Other than that, try concentrating on bringing originality to the table...Try trisyllabic....nah, you're not ready for that yet....Try "creating" different rhyme schemes, different rhyme patterns, add wordplay, word usage, word PLACEMENT....etc....Then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up...
In reply to: dip 's message, "first ish i've ever posted, not shure if i wrote the flow right" on 11:21:53 02/21/03 Fri


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  • this was real weak... sorry (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:56:05 02/21/03 Fri




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