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Date Posted: 20:33:03 02/25/03 Tue
Author: Pat D.A.W.G
Author Host/IP: host-209-214-168-124.sdf.bellsouth.net / 209.214.168.124
Subject: What up lounge been falling off a lil keystyle to the K.I.M

8 MONTHS SINCE ME AND MY GIRL BROKE UP, BOUT 6 MONTHS AFTER THE SPLIT i MOVED BACK IN WIT THE PEEPS. i HAVE NOTHING BUT HIP HOP PARENTS DONT FEEL ME NO FRIENDS TA KICK IT WITH AND AT TIMES I WANNA JUST DIE. THE REAL HIP HOP KEEPS ME GOING JUST BEAR WIT MY POSTS EVERY NOW AND THEN CUS I FEEL AS IF MY LIFE IS THE QUIET BEFORE THE STORM HITS, IAM READY FOR MY VOICE TO BE HEARD PEACE MUCH LOVE TA ALL REAL HEADZ OF THE ART.

Rigth off the bat I autograph mics wit a poetry craft/
cats loose paths cus they couldnt decipher the maps.
certain truths of life are being secretly suppressed/
wack crews is making the charts wit no heart and its making me stressed.
titanium pens bend wit ease when i'am welding my speach/
nouns and verbs stretch and extend so my words will reach.
You won't catch me running wit the rest of these hip hop nerds/
i feel like a crazy hyenna bout ta have feild day in a buffallo herd.
hip hops been kinda quiet yall, sorta like maybe its sleeping/
same cats wit joe flows cus the norm for talent has never been depened.
Seeking out the ways of wise elders cus knowledge is power/
cats making bounce hits for the honey but the taste is sour.
Representing ya hoods for vocal fillers but giving back nothing/
no more checks, u want respect but ya 0ne hit wonder is no longer bumping.
flossing and fronting will get u caught up wit two black eyes/
the way u display ya self like a walking department store u must not want ya shines.
cats wanna elevate ta get rich quick without gaining respect/
neva taking baby steps before ya big leap wit no true progress.
I mean try using ya mind before u go and construct ya rhymes/
quit using the same bullshit catch phrase just ta take up lost time.
its like...
33 percent of they albums is straight high school beef/
42 percent is weak and false rhyme schemes that we think is neat/
this shows that only 25 percent of these bounce records is truely complete.
shooting rhymes like arrows ta stimulate ya bone marrow.
making ya bones rock like a heavy metal moshpit/
sending minds off cliffs to a colorful soulful abyss.
lines neva miss flipping the game like it was a 5 pound penny/
i cant lose focus, confused and misuse what my god give me/
i do it for hip hop, life, and the true headz of my city.
Feeling like the more I wait the less time i have to escape/
running away from my fate ta elevate the times we chase.
the times we waste, living in our quiet domiciles not giving a fuck/
mentallity sees the poor and hungry as those who were born without luck.
I wanna gag the east end wit silver spoons filled wit toxic potions/
making backs break and head spins till they feel real life and soulful devotions.
Running through weak crews that make the charts laying'em flat like a matress/
after my first album, so much life and light it will be crowned as a classic.

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it wasn't a freestyle u don't write freestyles what I was saying was I expect high tech intellect 4 my freestyles (NT) -- dlaster, 21:15:03 02/25/03 Tue
after your first album?? have you even dropped AN audio yet, let alone MANY audios, which most albums list as their key ingredients? Other than that... your rhymes have all been used before, as has your topic. Speaking of your topic, that little paragraph you wrote on top confirmed my beliefs on lots of ... well, I'll just stop there. Peep inside for some feedback on lines... -- INTOX, 22:12:42 02/25/03 Tue
dont piss me off bitch -- dlaster, 22:13:29 02/25/03 Tue
yo son i honestly don't see anything wrong with this shit. i actually thought this flowed aiight. some ups and downs but yo son keep your head up. shit ain't over till it's over and it's only over when you say it is . stay up peace (NT) -- STARKS (the mouth of madnes), 23:08:20 02/25/03 Tue
This was aight.. but LMAOOOOO @ INTOX.. Damn, kid, he's about to kill himself (so he says) and you just cut him down.. Dont you know this is where he comes to make friends? (NT) -- ===||Swords---> LOL aitn that hard to make friends.. hit up your local YMCA or something.. Join the swim team.. haha.., 02:52:33 02/26/03 Wed
I Liked it... (it's tha first actual verse i read today... it feels good...) (NT) -- Darknodin, 09:57:58 02/26/03 Wed
titanium pens bend.. that line was pretty dope all in all not bad.. pretty tight! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 11:23:49 02/26/03 Wed

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