<font color=yellowgreen>Hmm this was aight.. i dont like how you structure your lines, too long, break em in two and itll be easier to read..</font> -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 03:32:09 02/06/03 Thu
Author: ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->
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Subject: Hmm this was aight.. i dont like how you structure your lines, too long, break em in two and itll be easier to read..
In reply to: LIPS 's message, "JUST A BATTLE VERSE I SPIT AT SOME DUDE! JUST AN INTRO TO THIS BOARD" on 01:53:41 02/06/03 Thu

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