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Date Posted: 11:37:29 02/06/03 Thu
Author: ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm
Author Host/IP: hlfx32-206.ns.sympatico.ca / 142.177.82.206
Subject: Look inside
In reply to: Pat D.A.W.G 's message, "All right yall, been kinda rusty a little bit bit. Keystyle I call "Mass of The Few" u betta know what side u on when the fake hip hop gets slayed PEACE" on 02:23:30 02/06/03 Thu

Ummmm, this was alright and lyrically you are coming along, but it seems to me that all your posts reflect the same idea or topic. After a while smashing commerical emcees and their monotonous ways, is just as repitative as what you're trying to oppose.
My advice would be to try and find something else to talk about so that you're innovating and elevating all at the same time. Something I used to do is try and write rhymes from the point of view of something unhuman, like one time I wrote a rhyme as a piece of shit falling out of an ass.
It may sound kind of foolish but it helps your writing in the sense that you become multi-dimensional. Just try and come with some different concepts and ideas is all I'm suggesting.

Peace

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  • iight, I was kinda getting bored while reading.. but it was pretty tight, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:50:40 02/06/03 Thu






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