AN ALL-NEW POST.....A DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET......"One Man's Spirit" Part 3....Warning: h £ k §-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Intrinsic Metaphors, And Vocabulary May Cause Mind-Stops..BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 15:49:59 02/12/03 Wed
Author: h £ k §-A-g Ø ñ/|_ A \/ ¡ § h...aka tH£ ƒ l e § h øƒ |Ð e § § ¡ £| J©
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Subject: AN ALL-NEW POST.....A DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET......"One Man's Spirit" Part 3....Warning: h £ k §-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Intrinsic Metaphors, And Vocabulary May Cause Mind-Stops..BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING...

From The Year 5697 (2137 A.D.)

A Petrarchan Sonnet:

Obscenities from my deviltry leveled decrees that are usually followed by a rebel that's confused
Unused in the methods of wretched-handling...deceptive planning from an ecletic, perfected stage of dreaming
"It's a wonder I'm stamping out the devilish-ones..then embellish as the God-complex becomes a lesser meaning!!"
My halo's slippin' off the "jilted-ill"..a tilted-thrill built with skill, though my lips' are sealed.."They feel loose!"
Loose enough to let "dirty words" slide off the same clean double-edged tongue that Yeshua used to announce bad news
While "The Heavenly Father" Factor manufactured the robotic-Christian to pro-create the Elected, selected carbonic-being
Breathing the Breath of Life while seeing the ÐeatH of Strife..."Who's next for a rougher beating?"
I AM the opposite of your "average" secular-humanist...on the other hand, my "average" Human Wit concludes a lesser meaning..
"Who's to stand in the way of gained insanity?..While my vain-inanity holds the manacles that arrested Christ!"
I AM one to confess advice that's stressed to suffice many apostles, composing a Petrarchan lyric so hostile
I AM the rope in this tug-of-war between the ƒ l e § h and Špirit..I AM liken to a rubber band stretched at both ends
"Who else you know can trek this terra firma with a firm grip on Vanity's License to throw a hold on God's Light...
..and has the ability to fold your spirit like some psyche origami!"..I GULP down your evil intent through this "outer-physical" bottle
Hallowed by a multitude with multiple insults reserved and rehearsed to re-enact the chokehold for their own sins

Narrator:
"Now I understand why......keep up the emotive-complex h £ k §!!!!"

"Touch me and you won't forget how I feel"--Rob Smith of Sonic Sum

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"and has the ability to fold your spirit like some psyche origami" <<< that was the illest line...had good flow all the way through but just better in parts, im glad it wasnt a chapter long...good as internal rhyming, i kinda see what you mean about taking multisyllabic rhyming farther...stay up (NT) -- Vis, 17:14:31 02/12/03 Wed

I really enjoyed this one, the multis were sick and the line continuity was good...I don't agree with your beliefs but that's your thing, this was nice work Hex (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm dude is called 'Jesus', 12:13:02 02/13/03 Thu

I AM the rope in this tug-of-war between the ƒ l e § h and Špirit..I AM liken to a rubber band stretched at both ends,..........illness......u simply poetic, but i picked up the rhyme scheme, i see alotta cats doin this, myself included...and when its spit right its beautiful.... (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 15:37:37 02/13/03 Thu

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