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Date Posted: 01:21:30 02/13/03 Thu
Author: nemo twerp
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 66.147.95.20
Subject: eutopia

focus your attention we're about to explore
a land of milk and honey that you've never seen before
a shadow of reality, resembled in substance, not in form
a place of supernatural, definitely not the norm

the topography is disturbing, the beauty blows your mind
the greenery is exotic, unlike any other kind
the animals they run wild, frolicking in the sun
but their dispositions are mild, the ecosystem is one

peace and tranquility, that is all thats felt
and sensational aromas, are the only fragrances smelt
our journey takes us further to the truth behind this land
the entire life force is sustained by the splendor of one hand

the complexity around us is greater than any logic we possess
the sedation we experience supercedes all turmoil we manifest
I feel so undeserving as if I cheated somewhere along the way
until I return from my journey and wish for it again some day

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If this was English Composition, I'd give you mad props cause this seemed more poetic for me. Kind of simple but keep buildin from that (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:40:54 02/13/03 Thu
hmm..dont know..it was like cool to read but i felt you could have kept going ya know? ..like add more to it so people could fully grasp what it was you were tryin to bring out..it was nice but yea it was simple..then again not all of us need to use big words or w/e to make shyt shine..so i guess just do you..cool drop though.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL First Person To Challenge A Wheel Chair Kid In A "Sit Up" Competition.., 14:01:57 02/13/03 Thu
yeah, erm i think it was more on the poetry side but it was still kinda cool to read. (NT) -- mc3, 14:41:04 02/13/03 Thu
I appreciate the four-line stanzas and everything....Keep this up.....If you ever want to collab, hit up the e-mail..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:30:54 02/13/03 Thu

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