yo i made this to release some anger, about this cat i'm beefing with -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 11:28:18 03/11/03 Tue
Author: INS
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 67.105.153.130
Subject: yo i made this to release some anger, about this cat i'm beefing with

fuck subliminal/this is really real yo/
I appear in the metaphysical/so you can't fuck up my flow/
fucking actor/ please Sean you've never been a factor/
need to start eating stacker/ cause right now ur just a skinny little cracker/
You really believe you made me/ this shit makes me crazy/
watchout, I really will blaze thee/ gat in the small of my back b/
you weak/ even after two bids up the creek/
raped everynight, everyweek/ musta made it hard to sleep/
(laughs)
you got no repect in the box/ while i remian stationary like numbers on clocks/
your busy suckin on cocks/ while i;m in the streets pushin the rocks/
Sean please, if your so smart/ why are we so far apart/
don't even make a real hustler start/ I personify heart/
I stepped in the game/ no one knew my name/
now 5 years later my power rains/ while you just sit and complain/
can't beat me/ so u beat dani?/
pussy a real gangsta don't gotta beat a girl, just to feel good/ something I ceratinly never would/
do or could/ one-on-one is how we should/
but you pussy/realness is something you'll never see
a fake ass connect/ couldn't even get a crackheads respect/
sometimes i sit back and reflect/ on how your whole operation is suspect/
your crew is weaker than toilet tissue/ quick to diss you/
if you were dead no one would miss you/ I hope the doctors won't even assist you/
every breathe you take/ only leads me to make/
me wanna create/ an evcen darker and more painful fate/
death becomes you/ one day i'll make it true/
go ahead let the beef simmer and stew/ till one day i finally see ya and choke ya blue/
make your eyes pop-out/ your head drop-out/
shits felt ear-to-ear/ I keep the beef pumpin year-to-year/
so terrified and filled with fear/ you see me in your mirror/
trust me this shits sincere/so lemme make it clear/
thou shall not fuck wit Crack God Number one/ unless you wanna feel my gun/
what u think i hustle for fun?/ leave your ass shot up, dead and done/
never have kids cause i'ma cut they fingers off/ when its comes to central pa/ I'm the boss... beeeeeeeeyatch

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yo INS you really need to change your rhyme style man... the lines in here are mad wack.... "need to take stacker cause your a skinny cracker"... damn comon man I know you can do better (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:41:17 03/11/03 Tue
- hows my style wack? if anything i'd say my content is a lil out there for people who don't me or my situation, but i'd say the rhyming and the flow is on point, pay attention to the intricate rhymes there are quite a few -- INS, 12:51:02 03/11/03 Tue
  - you're wack...even if i HEARD you SPIT this...to my FACE...i'd still tell you you're wack and to get out the cypha...and BTW Stacker® is a fat burner...so why would a "skinny little cracker" use it? (NT) -- INTROVERT, 11:05:50 03/12/03 Wed
No id say your content is a little wack for everyone over 14.. Carck God Number one? please...the flow is ok, but thats about it.. everyone can rhyme like this.. intricate rhymes my ass..point out one that rhymes mroe than 2 syllables together.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:39:23 03/11/03 Tue
i liked this on the whole but i still agree with *the dark spitter* about the cracker line (NT) -- nemesis, 14:40:27 03/11/03 Tue
At least I don't spit queer shit, no one else besides the geeks in here would wanna read, my shits marketable, and for those of you who didn't get the memo, even kweli and mos def are doin shit for the public now, get off the make believe fantasy land bullshit, comwe with something real.. something from the heart.. thats where real music comes from (NT) -- INS, 16:47:04 03/11/03 Tue
Mos and Talib are doing them you do you don't diss an intelligent approach cause you mad people aint feeling you like you want them to.. this was ok.. the flow was there.. keep writing and search for a stance to elevate.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:53:40 03/11/03 Tue
- I totally agree wit "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!" for real, keep writin tho!! (NT) -- chromenine@gmx.net, 04:11:09 03/12/03 Wed
all i'm sayin is rap from the heart, if u've been hustlin since u were a kid, its kinda hard not to mention fake if ur rappin on the whole peaceful less voliate tip, but i mean i'm not a hypocrite, if u never spenta day smokin herb, slanging and ish.. u shouldn't be talking bout it either, i just promote doin for self, ya'll feel me... -- INS, 08:22:10 03/12/03 Wed
Wow........wow.......this is really bad. I agree the shit might be marketable (look at Missie and Fresh) but that doesnt meen its good. And Just cause i think its bad and very (very very) simple doesnt meen the next man will. I got alot of shit from people on my first couple post on the forum and still do, but FUCK 'em.....Fuck 'em all. Cause at the end of the day, Its your shit not theres. (NT) -- Tactics, 11:49:42 03/12/03 Wed

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