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Date Posted: 13:23:54 03/12/03 Wed
Author: the dark spitter
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
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twenty4 bars.... key to sharpen skills.... nothing else

thunderous revelations/
spontanious lyrical basics/
swung circumfrences with rapier straightness/
the passion for reign to rule and leave the weak stated/
with horrorful facts to be faced with/
panaramic views of nature overall not mistaken/
nourishing static from haters feeds my nucleus and whatever I take in/
evaperate negativity thats self pertained in/
mind,body and soul destroying ignorent words in vein/
I modify the old being and spawn a new form thats great/
merge combinations to behold a elevated self in name/
intelectual impaired inhabitants get crushed by perfected dialect/
kinetic notations of motion metaphoriclly is what I eject/
orchistrated imagery produced when two worlds intersect/
I've transferd beyond the wack stages of the past/
"stupidity inself only reflects a suited ass"/
the undulation of flow hits the un-expected with many tons of mass/
usage of verbal assult resulted from elevated vertex/
my identifcation reveals a erick but no sign of the sermon/
I "concentrate" in "refugee camps" and still hate nazi germans/
intoxicated with a tremendous amount of berbin/
raged mind ripping holes in me makes me go swirvin/
into wrong paths/
rockey unsteady obsticals with pointed jagged shafts/
the wrong direction leads to the diablo of fames and infinte after math/
spitter just jotting down thoughts unto the blank pad/
the gift shows the true meaning into the gift of gab/

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yo, you got the full package on this one, you got flow, style and word play too. (NT) -- nemesis, 15:01:42 03/12/03 Wed
Yo this was tyte..but to me seems a bit scripted after a fellow lounger (NT) -- OV@...maybe it's just me seems like a copy-cat...maybe not on purpose,...sound lovely flowed nicely..vocab and all!!!, 16:59:45 03/12/03 Wed
yo darky spit spit I liked it but you still writing about the same shit at least this one made sense. (NT) -- Dlaster, 18:54:43 03/12/03 Wed
to dlar star... fuck you.. (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:31:27 03/13/03 Thu
- its not my fault your crazy its your moms cause she dropped you when you was a baby (NT) -- Dlaster, 20:53:46 03/13/03 Thu