<font color=yellowgreen>Umm this was ok, that whole Hitler part, i couldnt get into.. Whole structure was kinda basic.. Developing your style, it might come out nice, but right now there's a lot of work to be done..</font> -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 20:25:20 03/14/03 Fri
Author: ===||Swords--->
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 12.25.217.177
Subject: Umm this was ok, that whole Hitler part, i couldnt get into.. Whole structure was kinda basic.. Developing your style, it might come out nice, but right now there's a lot of work to be done..
In reply to: lyrikal mindz 's message, "just some shit i wrote for fun, some of it was put in just as lyrics so exuse anything entirely degrading read this let me know what uthink peace" on 19:34:31 03/14/03 Fri

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First off you cant expect to really rock Em's style? Can you? I mean that was carbon copy shit, I mean nothing at all about this was original.. you got talent why not use it on yourself not a well known established style.. that would just be dumb and corny.. that word in itself is scary when its used to describe your actions and mannerisms.. "Chess is like a sword fight.. you must think before you move.." and chess has massive correlations with life. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:30:40 03/15/03 Sat

umm shit just for fun -- lyrikalblows7, 01:41:28 03/17/03 Mon