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Date Posted: 21:13:40 05/16/04 Sun
Author: Jen
Subject: I must have signed something, even though I didn't mean to
In reply to: Jen 's message, "I accidentally became a democrat..." on 20:12:52 05/06/04 Thu

Peeping Tom: Patrick Lonergan
I like that this character is so nonchalant about what he�s doing. By making peeping a part of his routine you bring in comedy to the situation and take out some of the perviness. I am going to have to agree with whoever pointed out the inconsistency of �I know you don�t like to see dude�s thingies� and �I need to go peep on the boy�s dorms.� But other than that, great characterization.

Schick � Jim Bevan
You did a great job of working in as many puns as possible and most of them paid off. This is a bit long for a pun sketch, it�d be a good idea to trim the ones you think don�t work out quite as well as others in order to move the sketch as quickly as possible to get the jokes out but not over do it. At this length, you�re dangerously close to over doing it and a bit of trimming is all it takes to make this sketch really great.

Crossword Detective- CCS
So how is school? Are things finally calming down? I know you were stressed out. Anyway, this is a good idea; I didn�t feel like it had the energy that most of your sketches have. The detective was a great character, I loved him. The rest I wasn�t too keen on� oh well, it wasn�t my favorite, but I like the idea. FYI, I�m really bad at crosswords�.

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Because I got a WA democrat membership card in the mail -- along with a monthly donation option, 21:15:29 05/16/04 Sun
- Your interpretation is half-correct... -- JPIII, 22:19:47 05/16/04 Sun