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Date Posted: 03:44:29 05/14/14 Wed
Author: .....
Subject: Inside for the FWFS alternate endings.
In reply to: Araninda 's message, "The Alternate Endings" on 03:38:39 05/14/14 Wed

The Sexy Ending (script draft as of March 7, 2005)

Harm, Mac, Coates, Cresswell, Turner, Bud and Harriet are in McMurphy's Bar. The time is after Harm’s frocking ceremony. Harm in his mess dress with Captain’s bars. Mac is in the red dress. Hilarity ensues. Mac leans over to Harm.

Mac: “We need to talk.”

Harm: “We've been talking all night.”

Mac: “Let's take this outside.”

Mac stands, not minding that Harm is taking in the full view as she pulls a wrap around herself. Mac starts for the door and Harm can be seen appreciating her form as she walks away.

Harm and Mac exit the bar.

Mac: “What time's your flight?”

Harm: “Zero eight hundred.”

Mac: “That's eight hours from now.”

Harm: “What's your point?”

Mac: “That gives you two hours to finish packing...one hour to get to Andrews.”

She gives him a look. He plays along with it.

Harm: “What do I do with the other five?”

She holds out a set of keys.

Mac: “The big one's to the downstairs door. The small one's to my apartment. Sometimes it sticks a little so you'll want to give it an extra hard push.” (Seductively) “I won't be hard to find. I'll be the girl in the red silk camisole.”

Harm: “You look good in silk.”

Mac: “I look better out of it.”

Mac tosses him the keys.

Mac: “It's time we found out what the past nine years were all about.”

She turns to go. Harm is nearly speechless.

Mac: “See you, Harm.”

Harm (hesitates, then): “See you, Mac.”

Freeze...End of Show.


The Romantic Ending (script draft as of March 8, 2005)

The scene starts out the same as the above version:

Harm, Mac, Coates, Cresswell, Turner, Bud and Harriet are in McMurphy's Bar. The time is after Harm’s frocking ceremony. Harm in his mess dress with Captain’s bars. Mac is in the red dress. Hilarity ensues. Mac leans over to Harm.

Mac: “We need to talk.”

Harm: “We've been talking all night.”

Mac: “Let's take this outside.”

Then this version of the scene takes a different turn.

Mac and Harm come out into the cool of the night.

Harm: “So what's so important that it can't wait?”

Mac: “I have a proposition for you.”

Harm: “I have one for you.”

Mac: “Who goes first?”

Harm: “The lady, always.” (With a smile.) “Except this once.” (With a bigger smile.) “I have something for you.”

He reaches into a pocket of his dress uniform and takes out something wrapped in tissue paper.

Harm: “This is for you.”

Mac opens the tissue. We see what's inside. A diamond ring.

Mac: “What's this?”

Harm: “A diamond ring.”

Mac: “I know. But what does it mean?”

Harm: “Try it on.”

Mac slips it on her finger.

Harm: “It comes with a lifetime guarantee. Perhaps you've heard of it. Love. Honor. Obey.” (With a grin) “At least some of the time.”

Mac: “You're asking me to marry you eight hours before you get on a transport to London?”

Harm: “Better than that. There's a justice of the peace in Ellicott City who's standing by to marry us.”

Mac looks at him like he's crazy.

Mac: “When did you decide all this?”

Harm: “I've had the ring for six months. I've had the love for nine years.”

Harm (softly): “At a time like this it's customary for the woman to say something. Yes will suffice.”

Mac looks at him for a long beat.

Harm: “Remember the part about jumping off the ten meter board.”

Mac: “Yes. Yes to both questions.”

He takes her in his arms and kisses her. She kisses him back.

Mac: “This is going to take some getting used to.”

Harm: “We have a lifetime.”

Freeze....End of Show.

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[> [> unforturately we probably got the best one although I did like the romatic one -- Beth, 09:46:06 05/14/14 Wed

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[> [> My two favorit lines (one from each ending) are.... -- The Chief, 09:33:36 05/15/14 Thu

1) Mac: "It's time to find out what the last nine years were all about."

2) Harm: "I've had the ring for six months. I've had the love for nine years."

If they had put Harm's line first, her yes, a romantic kiss, then Mac's line, then dash to his 'Vette hand-in-hand... Yeah, that would have been another option.

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