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Who Would Have Thought It? (A response to Teacup's JAGged Lines Challenge #1 -- Jaggie 107, 01:18:36 08/10/08 Sun [11]
- Nice job. What were those stories of Keeter's (NT) -- Katiegirl, 01:46:31 08/10/08 Sun [1]
  - Keeter's stories (Inside...) -- Jaggie 107, 03:01:44 08/10/08 Sun [1]
- Aw a lovely story Jaggie 107 (NT) -- Bev uk, 09:10:36 08/10/08 Sun [1]
- How sweet! Thanks for sharing. (NT) -- Christa, 10:31:20 08/10/08 Sun [1]
- Ahhh great story as always. Thank you. (NT) -- Can sheshe, 12:54:01 08/10/08 Sun [1]
- Wonderful story. (NT) -- jagfannj, 15:07:16 08/10/08 Sun [1]
- Very sweet! (NT) -- judy52sa, 15:39:31 08/10/08 Sun [1]
- Thank you. This was what I would have liked to see. (NT) -- Debbi, 19:02:56 08/10/08 Sun [1]
- Very nice, thank you! (NT) -- fananicfan, 21:07:08 08/11/08 Mon [1]
- This was very nice! Thanks for giving something great to read during my lunch break today! (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 22:15:11 08/11/08 Mon [1]
Closing Curtain -- keru, 23:15:02 08/06/08 Wed [21]
- Impeccable vision. Definitely a keeper, keru! (NT) -- judy52sa, 23:30:19 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- A MUCH more emotionally satisfying replcaement! (NT) -- janlaw, 23:34:27 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Very nice. Much better conversation and resolution than what we got. (NT) -- Hope, 23:43:06 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Starting now, this is my replacement ending. I could just feel Mac's excitement. LOVED it. (NT) -- millport17, 00:12:39 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- This was really good! (NT) -- kate, 01:02:16 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Siiigh. Definitely liked this much better than what we got! -- Staz, 07:12:52 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Oh, if only. Why couldn't TPTB do this!!!!!! (NT) -- Debbi, 09:43:45 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Oh keru, this was so good. So much more complete than what we got. Thank you, thank you, thank you! (NT) -- jagfannj, 12:12:02 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- I agree with all has said above ! (NT) -- Laurence, with tears in her eyes, 14:08:46 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Keru you rock gal i love your stories so much please never stop writing them (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:36:15 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- More!!!!Please!! (NT) -- Lace, 17:40:58 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- I love this! This is much more plausible and satisfying than the bandaid we were given. Thank you! (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 19:38:37 08/07/08 Thu [1]
  - PS---Love the title! (NT) -- JJ (Ronda), 19:39:36 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Good job Keru - would have been nice to see something like this. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 19:56:46 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Great rewrite, keru. I agree... -- doc, 21:22:27 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- I feel better after this resolution... (NT) -- fananicfan, 22:15:26 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Great Keru....this was perfect...soooo much better! (NT) -- BlueJay, 23:09:38 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- I knew you could "make it right", or at least (inside) -- lotilu, 22:16:38 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- If only, indeed! ... -- Anneke (Big siiiiiigh!), 07:52:16 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- What a perfect, delicious ending! thanks for rewriting the rushed, half-hearted lines of the finale. (NT) -- Jill, 18:19:21 08/11/08 Mon [1]
Expect the Unexpected, C6/7 -- fananicfan, 11:36:05 08/09/08 Sat [8]
- Another great chapter. Can't wait to see Vukovic's expression when Mac drops the "bomb" so to speak and sends him scurrying away with his tail between his legs! (NT) -- Christa, 12:31:30 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- Is the next part ready yet? I know that you are spacing out the postings, but pretty please can we have it soon? (NT) -- Debbi, 14:06:56 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- Inside as to not spoil this section -- Karen Joy, 15:13:38 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- Oh post the last chapter soon please. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:35:42 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- Another excellent chapter, fananicfan...things becoming a bit clearer now. (NT) -- judy52sa, 19:41:18 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- I'm very eager to see this story's conclusion! (NT) -- Ella, 23:21:15 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- Can't wait to read the end, which I'm just about to do. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 01:28:37 08/10/08 Sun [1]
Faith 3-3 -- Fozzybear, 13:13:17 08/08/08 Fri [10]
- Aw lovely continue with the story please. (NT) -- Bev uk, 14:09:28 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Yes, continue please. (NT) -- Laurence, off to her bed, 16:02:15 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Another vote for continuing (NT) -- Karen Joy, 17:16:45 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- I think it's complete the way it is. (NT) -- bama, 18:42:48 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- I'm undecided. I say I have enough to be satisfied, but if you wrote more...I'd read it. Big help I am, huh? (NT) -- fananicfan, 19:25:47 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Please continue the story. (NT) -- harmsgirl, 23:04:44 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Very nice. But I would never object to someone writing MORE fanfic. LOL (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 00:31:25 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- I would love to read more, but if you are not inclined to continue, you left us at a good spot. (NT) -- Debbi, 00:54:42 08/09/08 Sat [1]
- I'm with fananicfan - either/or. Great story (NT) -- Katiegirl, 00:39:19 08/10/08 Sun [1]
Expect the Unexpected, C5/7 -- fananicfan, 19:24:44 08/08/08 Fri [8]
- This is great -- Michele, 19:32:38 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Ah! The explosion was a warning...now let's get Vukovic "bent like a pretzel" and sent packing!! He's so slimy at times. (NT) -- Christa, 19:40:12 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Another great chapter! (NT) -- cd, 20:03:20 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Eewwwhhh! Vukovic is an uber-jerk! Honestly, that guy! LOL Love seeing H/M work through the logic of the evidence and supposition about the case together. (NT) -- judy52sa, 21:58:04 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Just caught up, wonderul as always! (NT) -- Erk, 22:07:51 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Puke-ovic is such a jerk. I hope he gets what he deserves! (NT) -- Ella, 23:14:48 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Another great chapter (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:26:54 08/09/08 Sat [1]
Friday Night with Friends -- usmgrad, 20:40:19 08/06/08 Wed [12]
- Very nice story. You gotta love Keeter! Thanks for the fun! (NT) -- doc, 21:36:04 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- I really enjyed this. Thanks. (NT) -- Debbi, 22:13:03 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Clever use of the lines - way to go! (NT) -- kate, 00:53:09 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- What a fun night out. Would loved to hear more about Academy days (NT) -- Katiegirl, 02:51:37 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Good job! (NT) -- cd, 07:47:41 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Thanks, usmgrad! This is a great, fun story ... -- Teacup, 13:19:51 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- A lovely story. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:27:11 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Very nice! Always glad to see Keeter again! (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 19:35:03 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- I just love Keeter! (NT) -- fananicfan, 22:28:25 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Nice...Keeter's great! (NT) -- BlueJay, 22:57:57 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Loved it... -- Anneke, 07:55:26 08/09/08 Sat [1]
Re: Change to Teacup's JLFF Challenge #1 -- Teacup, 18:31:50 08/08/08 Fri [2]
- I have been super busy lately and checked the board to see it swamped with new stories. I just wanted to thank all of you for your stories, I enjoyed each and every one, and thanks Teacup for adding extra motivation (now you should start writing!) (NT) -- Erk, 20:15:38 08/08/08 Fri [1]
Cleaning the air HBX Challenge August 2008 -- Lace, 16:53:24 08/07/08 Thu [10]
- Wonderful - why couldn't you write for JAG? (NT) -- Debbi, 17:06:03 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Now this I would have liked to have seen! ... -- Teacup, 17:31:39 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Cute! This would have been a great scene to have actually seen. (NT) -- Christa, 19:28:22 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Great job Lace, love the way you present these characters (NT) -- Katiegirl, 20:16:43 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Great story! (NT) -- cd, 21:18:36 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Good stuff! I like a little fight before kissing and making up. (NT) -- fananicfan, 22:14:06 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Long overdue! I love it when they are BOTH finally out front like this! (NT) -- judy52sa, 23:07:46 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Good job Lace loved it. (NT) -- Bev uk, 14:05:53 08/08/08 Fri [1]
- Great job! Inside -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 19:09:59 08/08/08 Fri [1]
Expect the Unexpected, C4/7 -- fananicfan, 09:54:07 08/07/08 Thu [10]
- Definitely glad! Something tells me though that the type of explosive is a key. Just guess I'll have to wait and see! (NT) -- Christa, 10:24:25 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Very much a relief to have Harm back. Not that Mac can't handle Vukovic herself, but she'll enjoy it much more with Harm watching her six, and so will we! (NT) -- kate, 13:16:10 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Absolutely! (NT) -- judy52sa, 14:16:39 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Aw so glad Harm is home the dynamic duo back together loving this story very much. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:48:14 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Just as I hoped. If the case gets to court, can Harm help Mac prosecute against Vukovic? (NT) -- Debbi, 16:59:09 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- As usual I enjoy your Rabb family.:) (NT) -- Lace, 17:25:17 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Great chapter and I'm very glad that Harm is home. Now, to focus on the case, beat Vukovic and send him packing! (NT) -- rmhlrkr, 19:42:46 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Glad Harm's back and agree that there is something to the explosive theory. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 20:10:48 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- glad Harm is home! (NT) -- cd, 20:34:28 08/07/08 Thu [1]
Hope (Part 2) -- Fozzybear 2, 15:01:54 08/06/08 Wed [9]
- I'm sory that should be Faith not Hope. (NT) -- Fozztbear, 15:03:30 08/06/08 Wed [1]
  - A great & emotional chapter, I'm eager to see what happens next.Thank you it was a beautiful bedtime story. (NT) -- Laurence, 15:16:47 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Can't wait to see where this journey goes. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 17:41:22 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Great! I can't wait for more, I want to see the rabbit pulled from the hat! (NT) -- colee41, 18:33:24 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Amazing...I can't wait to see how this evolves. (NT) -- Debbi, 22:09:20 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Hmmm..I'm eager to see where you're taking this. Can't wait for more. (NT) -- Ella, 23:17:07 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Looking forward to more Fozzy Bear. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:22:18 08/07/08 Thu [1]
- Interesting development. I can't wait to see how this plays out! (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 19:33:42 08/07/08 Thu [1]
I've posted the challenge lines for August. (NT) -- Cece, 23:17:02 08/04/08 Mon [3]
- I have a question...where in the episode does this happen...I want to know if I'm hearing impaired or if something is missing from my DVD (NT) -- fananicfan, 16:13:55 08/05/08 Tue [1]
  - I sometimes take the lines from the written scripts, which may have changed by the time they get to the screen. I believe Mac is teaching Bud how to dance. (NT) -- Cece, 09:03:28 08/07/08 Thu [1]
Expect the Unexpected C3/7 -- fananicfan, 10:31:09 08/06/08 Wed [9]
- Will Harm get home in time? Will Harm be able to help with the case? Stay tuned for the next exciting chapter...Thanks fananic fan. This is great. (NT) -- Debbi, 11:13:56 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Mac's gonna have to start taking care of herself more isn't she? Too bad Harm's not home til Friday...wonder if he'll want to be 2nd chair on tthe case when he gets back??? (NT) -- Christa, 11:15:19 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Oh another great chapter getting more exciting. (NT) -- Bev uk, 14:44:03 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Good job, can't wait for the next installment (as usual) (NT) -- Katiegirl, 17:36:34 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Aww! Cute. (NT) -- katydid13, 19:23:10 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Love this series, can't wait for the next chapter! Oh ... and Harm better get home by Friday or he'll have a marine and a mini-marine upset with him!!! ;-) (NT) -- colee41, 19:47:36 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- She definitely has her hands full, I'd say! Looking forward to the next development! (NT) -- judy52sa, 23:15:26 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Great chapter! (NT) -- Ella, 23:28:40 08/06/08 Wed [1]
Trip to the Beach -- keru, 10:41:12 08/05/08 Tue [22]
- Cute! (NT) -- Christa, 11:15:24 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Very sweet! (NT) -- fananicfan, 11:18:24 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- So sweet!! (NT) -- Lace, 14:06:13 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Wonderful story. (NT) -- jagfannj, 14:21:23 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- I loved this! (NT) -- Debbi, 14:35:26 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Loved it Keru glad to see your stories back. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:42:25 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Yummy! Now you... -- Anneke (Desperate need=icecream NOW;)), 15:56:35 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Loved it - what a fun read! I grinned through the whole story! Thanks for the smile!! (NT) -- lisa, 16:16:32 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- LOL! How did you know I just *needed* to read this story? -- Staz, 16:49:42 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Smiling from ear to ear! Great to see your work again, Keru! Such a pleasure! (NT) -- judy52sa, 18:12:59 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Great job Keru. Nice way for me to start the day. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 18:15:43 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Awww, very sweet! Thanks for sharing this! (NT) -- Taz, 18:42:35 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- I absolutely LOVE this story. ... (inside) -- Teacup, 19:19:11 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- LOL,,that was adorable. Love their playful moods. (NT) -- BlueJay, 19:35:07 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Ahhh, the good kind of fluff, marshmallow creme with hot chocolate sauce on the side! This was very sweet. Nothing better than the MacKenzie-Rabb clan having fun at the beach, except for maybe Harm bare-chested & in swim trunk...and glory be, you "done gived us both!" Thanks for... -- doc, 20:46:44 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- So cute! Fluff is good! Now I'm off to get some ice cream... (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 21:04:52 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- When I was a kid the Mickey Mouse ice cream bars were my favorite! What a great summer treat :) (NT) -- Ella, 22:34:13 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Will be looking for them on the beach this weekend - definitely in the vicinity of the snackbar! (NT) -- janlaw, 00:53:59 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Trip to the Beach-A gem, I love your "Rabb Family" so glad to see that you are still writing. I need my Keru fixed!! Thanks (NT) -- Ann Kane, 12:08:51 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- I love this version of the "Rabb family". I feel it would be natural for both Mac and Harm worry about age, as they started their family late and are both very active. Nice work. I hope you write more about them. (NT) -- Ed from B, 13:15:28 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Aww keru! Another charming portrait of my favorite couple. Thank you very much! (NT) -- Peggy C, 17:25:42 08/06/08 Wed [1]
Out of my mind -- Staz, 19:56:18 08/04/08 Mon [21]
- Loved it! (NT) -- fananicfan, 20:49:36 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Great fun. Wish we could have seen something like this. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 22:26:30 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- This is definitely one of my new faves! So much fun to read :) (NT) -- Ella, 23:00:32 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Oh, this was a total shot of F-U-N! Gosh, I miss these people!! (NT) -- millport17, 23:07:44 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- This was a blast. Absolutely priceless line whether the CO is AJ or Cresswell. Just priceless. (NT) -- Janlaw, 23:14:16 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- This was a riot! Great read! (NT) -- judy52sa, 01:55:20 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Very enjoyable, Staz -- Made me smile!! ... (inside) -- Teacup, 03:01:01 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Good job! (NT) -- cd, 08:14:34 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Ah, those accidental moments. Very good (NT) -- CAZ, 08:45:11 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Uh uh, I found it, I found my sentence! LOL!!! How are we going to keep you in Paris and ride the Metro more, so we get more stories?! *grin* I loved Mac's inner dialog, esp. when she then just blurted it out! :-D Great story!!! (NT) -- Colie, 10:52:37 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Very cute! Great job, Staz. (NT) -- jagfannj, 14:00:41 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Pure bliss! ... -- Anneke, 14:58:56 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Loved it Staz. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:24:51 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Loved it! And do I get points if I can guess which line is dedicated to Colie? (NT) -- Theresa, 15:27:13 08/05/08 Tue [1]
  - Sure! You can get a thousand meaningless points if you guess correctly! ;-) (NT) -- Staz, 16:10:38 08/05/08 Tue [1]
    - They're only meaningless if I don't guess right. LOL! (NT) -- Theresa, 16:40:42 08/05/08 Tue [1]
      - So, does that mean you've guessed?? (NT) -- Staz, 16:50:48 08/05/08 Tue [1]
        Still contemplating. Hmm.... (NT) -- Theresa, 15:26:14 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- I'm so glad this ended so well -- keru, 18:43:00 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- I loved this! My favorite line was (inside) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 21:01:31 08/05/08 Tue [1]
Floodgates and Ice Cream -- Mari, 19:33:27 08/05/08 Tue [5]
- Nice job. Good use of some challenging lines. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 19:56:26 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Wow. Good use of all five lines. Impressive (NT) -- CAZ, 21:34:15 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Great job! I could sooo see this happening! I think this is exactly how Harm would react. (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 12:38:36 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- A sweet story. (NT) -- Bev uk, 14:34:06 08/06/08 Wed [1]
Faith (I have no Beta, so all mistakes are mine.) -- Fozzy bear, 17:59:58 08/05/08 Tue [12]
- Great start...looking forward to your continuing this! (NT) -- judy52sa, 18:23:07 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- I enjoyed this. It looks promising! -- keru, 18:23:31 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Can't wait to see where this goes (NT) -- Katiegirl, 18:30:27 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Hey, Fozzie Bear!! Email me, please!!--and a good start, by the way!! (NT) -- highplainswoman, 19:19:50 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- This is touching ... and promising. I'm looking forward to more! (NT) -- Teacup, 19:59:09 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- What a conversation to have on the way out the door. This is an interesting start, can't wait for more. (NT) -- doc, 20:56:51 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Great start. Looking forward to more soon (NT) -- CAZ, 21:10:03 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Looking forward to reading more! (NT) -- Ella, 22:10:03 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- This is so sweet! Update soon =) (NT) -- Kim, 03:12:06 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Very nice! Will there be more? (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 12:37:25 08/06/08 Wed [1]
- Ooh Fozzy Bear you can not leave it there more please and soon. (NT) -- Bev uk, 14:29:29 08/06/08 Wed [1]
Expect the Unexpected C2/7 -- fananicfan, 10:45:22 08/05/08 Tue [9]
- Great 2nd chapter and no I didn't see her taking the case...taking Vukovic down a peg or two yes. Will be glad to see the next installment. Sure hope Harm gets home by Thursday! (NT) -- Christa, 11:01:22 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Raod Kill! (NT) -- Always Impatient Spud, 12:19:17 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- As I was reading the chapter, I thought that she was going to bring Harm in when he returned to take down Vukovic. (NT) -- Debbi, 14:28:21 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Good chapter looking forward to more. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:51:21 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Great chapter....always wonderful to see Mac take down Vukovic a peg or two! (NT) -- judy52sa, 17:56:50 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Of course we didn't see it comng (grinning cheekily), can't wait for the next installment. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 18:25:20 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Take him down. Looking forward to Mac doing just that (NT) -- CAZ, 21:15:26 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Ooh I'm looking forward to seeing Mac knock that know-it-all down! I just hope she doesn't over do it... (NT) -- Ella, 22:24:24 08/05/08 Tue [1]
Double Negative (HBX Challenge - August 2008) -- Jaggie 107, 04:03:47 08/05/08 Tue [12]
- Great story. What a way to get them together. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 06:54:38 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Nice touch! (NT) -- BlueJay, 07:20:20 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Not quite sure how we got from Pt A to PT B but no matter, I'll take them together any way you want to put them together! Glue works too. (NT) -- janlaw, 08:36:54 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Nice way to get out of Never Never Land! (NT) -- Christa, 09:43:03 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- I enjoyed it. I laughed aloud when I read this line... -- Lee, 11:21:24 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- I liked the story. (NT) -- fananicfan, 11:22:51 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Fun scene! (NT) -- kate, 11:59:54 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Loved it, especially ... -- Anneke, 15:18:15 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Good story. (NT) -- Bev uk, 15:30:01 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Good job! (NT) -- judy52sa, 18:19:01 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Very nice! I especially loved the ending where (inside) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 21:03:12 08/05/08 Tue [1]
May 2008 HBX Challenge FF: Doing Harm -- TR, 02:03:14 08/04/08 Mon [16]
- Wow! Total Sweetness! I was perfectly ok... -- Anneke (Lesson today: DON'T be so nosy), 04:02:04 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Oh sooooooo good! Definitely! (NT) -- BlueJay, 07:11:15 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- This is great, TR. I like my imagination! (NT) -- Lee, 10:14:47 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Amazing! (NT) -- Debbi, 10:51:05 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- (Ha..a word I don't know, and now, thanks to Anneke, don't want to...LOL) TR, this was really good. Your dialogue made it clear whose voice we were "hearing." (inside). -- Cece, 11:20:27 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- This was great, TR. You certainly met the challenge and beyond. A really fun read. (NT) -- jagfannj, 12:46:41 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- cuteness! (NT) -- Jill, 14:02:36 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- A great job TR well done it was lovely. (NT) -- Bev uk, 14:58:39 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- LOL.Nice challenge. Boy what the imagination can come up with, with that dialog. (NT) -- Hope, 15:02:51 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- The most perfect way to end my day - reading your story! -- Staz, 16:23:41 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Great job TR. (NT) -- Katiegirl, 19:08:54 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Oh, this was so funny! And it worked because you only gave us dialogue. With no descriptions to guide us we could think the wrong thing. Or, was that the right thing...lol (NT) -- JAG Junkie (Ronda)--Bravo on yet another fine job!, 20:56:13 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Loved it TR! Great banter with warmth and sweetness! (NT) -- millport17, 22:58:04 08/04/08 Mon [1]
- Good job! (NT) -- tamk3, 07:31:50 08/05/08 Tue [1]
- Wow! You had me from the title, and it just got better and better! Loved the banter, the implied sexiness... I loved it all, and I usually don't even like dialog-only fics! (NT) -- Colie, 10:47:12 08/05/08 Tue [1]

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