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Subject: Tell me what you think...

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Ripple Silentsplash
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Date Posted: 01:22:43 01/11/04 Sun

I am writing a story about redwall, tell me what you think! (It's in the replies)

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Ok, heres the Prologue and Chapter 1 (inside) Ripple Silentsplash 03:01:52 01/11/04 Sun

Even if nobeast reads it, I have to post this story on here, or else it will swirl around in my head, and I could never forgive myself if I didn't type it down somewhere. (Inside for Chapter 2 ) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 14:50:48 01/11/04 Sun

Chapter 3 -- Ripple Silentsplash, 17:27:17 01/11/04 Sun

A sand colored hare with brown paws and ears smiles.*Well, ole chap, don't leave me on th' tip o me seat! (NT) Steadykick 19:33:06 01/11/04 Sun

Well thanks! You seem to be the only creature reading it, but that's alright. (Inside for Chapter 4 -- Ripple Silentsplash, 21:38:01 01/11/04 Sun

Chapter 5 (inside) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 20:13:49 01/12/04 Mon

She smiles and comments, *Jolly good story wot! I could never write good riddles me bally self wot! Keep going though! (NT) Steadykick 23:07:26 01/12/04 Mon

Thanks, it is getting harder to continue, but I promised myself that I would finish it. (Chapter 6 inside) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 14:28:35 01/13/04 Tue

Chapter 7 (inside) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 18:15:19 01/14/04 Wed

Jolly good! Keep writin! (NT) -- Steadykick, 21:16:28 01/14/04 Wed
Chapter 8 (Inside) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 17:09:26 01/15/04 Thu

Great! Keep blikin' writin! (NT) Steadykick 21:36:56 01/16/04 Fri

Inside for Chapter 9 -- Ripple Silentsplash, 01:28:02 01/17/04 Sat

Erm, I'm suffering from writers block. I will be back to the story as soon as I can get back into the mood. *Blushes.* (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 20:23:35 01/18/04 Sun
Yes! I have overcome the dreaded writers block!! Inside for Chapter 10. -- Ripple Silentsplash, 19:52:04 01/19/04 Mon

Keep writing as soon as you can! (NT) Steadykick 03:50:30 01/19/04 Mon

Chapter 11 inside -- Ripple Silentsplash, 20:48:43 01/20/04 Tue

GREAT! GOGOGOGOGO! (NT) Steadykick 22:51:31 01/20/04 Tue

Inside for Chapter 12 (Thanks for all the encouragement) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 13:36:37 01/21/04 Wed

Chapter 13 (Inside) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 20:02:23 01/21/04 Wed

Oh no! I was going to write Chapter 14, when I realized that I have MAJOR writers block. I'm taking a break until I have good ideas on what to write again. (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 17:49:44 01/22/04 Thu

WRITE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (NT) Steadykick 21:26:24 01/22/04 Thu

At long last..... Chapter 14!!! (Inside) Oh, and I would be most greatful for somebeasts out there to give me ideas on what to name my story. Pleeaaase!! -- Ripple Silentsplash, 15:57:38 01/26/04 Mon

Chapter 15 (Inside). Does anyone no how to change the font? It wasn't like this before... -- Ripple Silentsplash, 01:52:35 01/28/04 Wed

Here's the piccy of Aubbressia, right inside. Aliana 19:02:10 01/26/04 Mon

Here's the piccy of Aubbressia, right inside. Aliana 19:04:17 01/26/04 Mon

Thanks! (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 19:24:49 01/26/04 Mon

How about you call the story, The Place of No Return? (NT) -- Demora, 20:15:39 01/26/04 Mon

Great idea. But I think I want to have more than one to choose from. Becides, it gives people a chance to be creative! *Wink* (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 20:21:16 01/26/04 Mon

Please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (NT) Steadykick 20:42:50 01/26/04 Mon

Oops! How did Chapter 15 get way back there? I must have accidently posted it there. (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 02:30:27 01/28/04 Wed

's a weally good stowy!! (NT) -- Saih Darkeye, 17:03:55 01/28/04 Wed

So tis, so tis! (NT) -- Steadykick, 21:11:03 01/28/04 Wed
Thanks! Chapter 16 inside. -- Ripple Silentsplash, 21:22:29 01/28/04 Wed

Please keep writing! A cliff hanger, jus like BJ! (NT) -- Steadykick, 01:32:17 01/31/04 Sat

Yargh!!! I wanna strangle writers block!!!!!!!! Grrrr. I'm stuck between a rock an' a hardplace tryin' to think of more ideas. But I will continue very soon. (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash (Who wants writers block to go jump off a cliff), 21:59:23 01/31/04 Sat

Writers block has desided to no longer torment me! Chapter 17 inside. -- Ripple Silentsplash, 16:53:41 02/01/04 Sun

Ooh, what happens now? (NT) Checkery 17:04:00 02/01/04 Sun

Please dont let Revin die! Did I spell his name right? Anyhoo, gogogogogog! (NT) Steadykick 18:18:46 02/01/04 Sun

Yes you spelled his name right. I wrote chapter 18, but I deleited the whole thing by accident. I am sort of depressed about that, so I may not rewrite it for a little while. :'( >:( :( (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash (Who wants to kill her computer for deleiting the story), 01:13:17 02/02/04 Mon

At long last, Chapter 18 inside! -- Ripple Silentsplash, 16:19:53 02/05/04 Thu

Keep writing....like I said, don't DO NOT, I repeat, DOOOO NOOOOOTTTTTT LET REVIN DIE, OKAY?! KEEP WRITING (NT) -- Steadykick, 22:12:50 02/06/04 Fri

Hurra!! Chapter 19 inside. -- Ripple Silentsplash, 18:22:46 02/08/04 Sun

Hay, Ripple, after Revin is better, could something happen to Tarrow? Oh, and I don't care what's happinin' back at th' abbey unless vermin are close to attack. Don't put Redwall in there if something BIG is gonna hapin. Not the feast. I just like the quest part. NOT THAT I DON"T LIKE IT! I LOVE IT! I just don't like the Abbey part. (NT) -- Steadykick, 21:40:32 02/08/04 Sun

I'll still write the Abbey part, but I won't post it here. How does that sound? I will probably write the next chapter this after noon.......(One reason I put the abbey part in is because it makes the chapter longer.) (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 14:50:02 02/09/04 Mon

Sounds good to me. (NT) Steadykick 23:01:39 02/09/04 Mon

Urgh!!! Sorry, but I have no time to bother with taking out the abbey bits. Chapter 20 inside. -- Ripple Silentsplash, 20:30:26 02/13/04 Fri

Keep writing. (NT) Steadykick 21:15:10 02/13/04 Fri

Argh!!!! Die writers block, die!!! (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash (Who wants writers block to go jump off a cliff again), 02:11:16 02/20/04 Fri

Yay!!! All rejoice, Chapter 21 is finished! Inside. -- Ripple Silentsplash, 23:00:37 02/20/04 Fri

Okayyyyyyy....Get Reivin better and have something happen to Tarrow.......... (NT) -- Steadykick, 23:26:29 02/23/04 Mon

But.......but..... Why do you want something to happen to Tarrow? I can't exactly do that because I've got the whole rest of the story mapped out in my head, I'm just sometimes never able to get it written down. (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash the confused......, 23:36:22 02/23/04 Mon

Chapter 22 inside. (This is getting longer than I ever thought it would!!) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 16:11:49 03/03/04 Wed

Ack!!! It copyied THREE times. Meaning there are really three chapter 22's in that post. Why oh why do these things happen to me? (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash, 16:16:59 03/03/04 Wed

You? I dunno. Keep writing though. It's getting anti-climactic though. (NT) Steadykick 15:12:21 03/06/04 Sat

Er, anti-climactic? Sorry, but.... What's that mean? I'm only 11 IRL!!!! (NT) -- Ripple Silentsplash the ignorant otter, 01:22:26 03/07/04 Sun

Ah well. Here is Chap. 23 if anybeast cares to read it...... -- Ripple, the ignored ottermaid *sniffle*, 17:20:02 03/21/04 Sun

Bump (NT) -- R. S. **Sigh**, 18:15:16 03/24/04 Wed

YAY! NOW ITS NOT! Anticlimactic means...uh...not exciting. Its exciting now! (NT) -- Steadykick, 01:22:18 03/26/04 Fri